Treasure Island

Elena Sandu


Snow drops


From today, March 1st,
This sunny day,
To 8th of March
Most women of my land
Will smile and pray
Inside their hearts.
For One they Love!
The much loved man
Will hear woman's call.
There he is!
As in her secret thoughts
At her own door:
Holding a bunch of
gentle little snow drops.
She'll have those sweet flowers
Then he will be paid instead
Only one warm but sweetest kiss!
Yet! For the spring to come,
He needs
A thousand!
So, now get ready
His time to pray:
She has to kiss him
Nine hundred ninety nine
Times again!
Let's hope she'll hear,
Get it done.
Or...
Spring, will never ever
come...

So, may I say my my pray:
For man to give
their loved ones what they wish
And woman give man
a bit more then a much too little
Tiny kiss?

Submitted: Saturday, March 06, 2010
Edited: Friday, September 13, 2013

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*snowdrop~ 待雪草(まつゆきそう)

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  • Anthony Burkett (1/23/2014 10:10:00 AM)

    Delightful! I wish spring could hear your words, I believe she would pounce upon us... like a playful child come to their parents bedroom at morning's first light....spreading flowers and kisses of her own, enough to satisfy the heart's desire. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (10/8/2013 1:11:00 AM)

    The last stanza is so wonderful!
    She'll have those sweet flowers
    Then he will be paid instead
    Only one warm but sweetest kiss!
    Yet! For the spring to come,
    He needs
    A thousand! '
    Wow! A heart refreshing poem! (Report) Reply

  • Moonbee Canady (6/28/2010 10:42:00 PM)

    A very lovely, sweet and enjoyable read. And nice humor included (smile) ... A very nice re-telling of tradition from your homeland... You gave us an enchanting mind picture of words... MoonBee (Report) Reply

  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (6/2/2010 12:22:00 AM)

    ‘women give men a bit more then a much /too little- tiny kiss! ! ’ women are emotionally ahead for always some extra …caught metaphorically...befitting …nice diction
    10/10
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

  • Is It Poetry (4/8/2010 10:32:00 AM)

    Therefore as for that
    for you the only
    ' from which is, I perhaps you say;
    Perhaps,
    just my praying:
    In the same way
    and the family to the woman gives that person
    more from the person,
    from whom it should give,
    desires as for the greatly excessively small small butterfly
    for the family which kisses to........... iip (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/17/2010 10:09:00 PM)

    so, may I say my my pray:
    for man to give the loved ones what they wish
    and women give men a bit more then a much
    too little- tiny kiss! ! .......................ya as almost all woman falk do to their counterpart...spring may come with new message and this is time to exchange..lovely write....10

    read mine.. snow.. i miss... anywhere (Report) Reply

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