Our Jackass Family....[ Really, Our Last Name Is Jackass! ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Our Jackass Family....[ Really, Our Last Name Is Jackass! ]

Rating: 4.3

Joan, a 'Love Child', 'Our Girl', was at our wedding.
Alan, our first son, came soon after & loved sledding.
Carole, red-haired, green-eyed, arrived with her twin,
Karl Jr., but Karl died in infancy, with his dimple in chin.
Arlene, our heaviest baby, could win any board game.
Stephen was a standout in the classroom a 'shining star'.
Sean was 'sweet', but, because of 'drugs', didn't go far.

[[ We are done making children now, but we still fool...
around in bed.
We're both approaching '50' now, and hope for grand-
kids now instead! ]]

(July 14th, 2023)

bri w. edwards

Saturday, July 15, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: acrostic,family,parents,grandchild,being different
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I had a minor delay trying to erase a hashtag/topic-name I inadvertantly chose from a PH hashtag selection when I wanted 'family'. Instead I chose 'ewing family of tumors'! ! ! I finally succeeded by using my wife's 'backspace' key to erase it. Where WAS I before I got sidetracked? ? Thanks ANY Readers who stop by, & Thanks for any comments left, including any from ME! ! ! At least for this poem [and for the first time ever, anywhere, on PH today I added 'w' as my nom de plume's middle initial. ;) bri w. edwards
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 15 July 2023

Hey, bri w. edwards, great job, but you messed up in one place ABOVE your poem(s) , referring to 5 limericks, not 6.. You DUMMY! ! : ))) B.W.E.

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M. Asim Nehal 16 July 2023

I give full 5 Stars for sharing this wonderful poem.

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M. Asim Nehal 16 July 2023

So age is catching up but remember BED will not leave you just like that. Bri, I liked your poem, I used to wonder how BIG your family IS, with four wives (3 EX now) and so many childrens and grandchildrens how do you COPE UP with.

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Bri Edwards 24 July 2023

Asim and OTHERS: i HAVE, thank goodness, only one child and one grandchild from 4 wives. Of course I 'had' a vasectomy a few months after my daughter was born in 1981. bri ;)

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Sheeya Hacks 16 July 2023

please think for something creative here and compete with your children and grandchildrens. ha ha : ) Sheeya 5 STARS.

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Bri Edwards 24 July 2023

THANKS ALL COMMENTERS. ;)))))

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Sheeya Hacks 16 July 2023

Another surprise! bri w. edwards? ? ? Aka Brian. This is well thought poem, I enjoyed the introduction part with rhyme and the way you ended the poem, but got stuck between ' [[ ' and fooling around in bed Cont...

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Bharati Nayak 16 July 2023

Whatever we write here is not complete truth.I don't believe your family's last name is Jackass.

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Bri Edwards 20 August 2023

OR MAYBE MY REAL NAME IS 'Jack Ass'? ? ?

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Bri Edwards 24 July 2023

How about Assjack? ? ?

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