Once I Poem by Neela Nath Das

Once I



Once I did a mistake,
and the punishment
is on and on.
I went thru your poem
but my comment
had no reflection.
I confessed my fault
and never tried to drown.
But, you did a lot
and my two computers
turned off
and they blocked
my new-thought.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is funny thougt.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 15 October 2013

Neela lovely nice write thank you

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 October 2013

The external feeling reflects in inner performance. Beautifully presented. Thank you.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 13 October 2013

We are in public ho are perhaps different and sometimes indifferent.Roses are bound to bloom though none cares.

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Sekharan Pookkat 12 October 2013

man and machine are different

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