| |
Pacific Hernandez (9/29/2008 7:08:00 AM)
A very good poem. Pleasing. I like the rhymes. |
Janelle Morehart (10/18/2007 7:45:00 AM)
Wow, such great writing and wonderful ryhme (thats most likely spelled wrong sorry) I loved this piece a lot! I'll save this page so I can read it a few more times haha. Great work. Loved it! |
K K (3/6/2007 7:45:00 AM)
Very true....we know not what we teach to our children.
KK |
Alison Smith (1/26/2007 1:29:00 AM)
A lovely tale well worth the read...
Alison |
Linda Ori (7/12/2006 10:41:00 PM)
Interesting and a bit sad (for the apple, that is) . Sometimes we give up our lofty dreams to just be one of the bunch - and then find out it's not what we thought it would be. Simple and a pleasure to read. Thank you.............
Linda |
Duncan Wyllie (4/16/2006 4:33:00 PM)
I really enjoyed this one, the apple knew of its true place in time no matter how absurd
it's postion seemed, a great use of imagery and wording, Love Duncan |
Natshia Bellgini (12/15/2005 6:52:00 AM)
A good poem. This world
need more humor.
I liked thisl
natshia |
Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari (9/5/2005 9:15:00 PM)
Cute poem...Enjoyed it very much! |
Terry B (8/10/2005 10:12:00 AM)
I enjoyed this write, brought a smile to my face. I like the meaning behind this, great write. |
Herbert Nehrlich (8/6/2005 5:41:00 PM)
No Sherrie, you are still not seeing clearly. When I look at myself I see something I like. No need to start over, make over, fall over. So get over yourself and maybe, just maybe there is hope for you.
H |
| |
