No One Poem by live to die

No One

Rating: 3.2


It seems like no ones there
but there is you cant notice because your worries got you traped
the lonlyness you feel is just in your mind
locked in your mind look around then you will notice
someone is there but they arnt
looking at them they are a different person
like a stranger all they know about you is nothing except
what you let them see
so you act so they wont worrie about you
you hate them when they try to help
you love them when they are gone
till there is no one then youll be affaird
not to be seen alone no one there to comfort you
in all the pain you have hidden

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arabian Heart 23 June 2008

a vortex are you looking for a way out or are you looking for someone have an Arabian time for me please

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Tyease Collins 22 June 2008

Deep...I likey a lot

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Fallen Too Far 19 January 2008

Incredible, dude. Words out of your heart. Beautiful.

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Fear Of Love 10 January 2008

yay! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! first comment spaztastic dance. ok........ehm ehm (clears throught) I already read it.............nah nah nah nah nah! ok but seriously i love it much! xoxo

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