I Hate You Poem by live to die

I Hate You

Rating: 3.8


While you sit there watching the blood hit the floor for the last time I sit watching my life pass for the last time blood driping from my hands both of us look at eachother looking with an evil glare thinking I hate you wanting to see you dead wanting to see you suffer for all the pain you caused for me watching death creep closer and closer for both of us but i finaly noticed there was only one of us both of us was just me and a mirror all the pain I caused for myself will be gone soon one final moment to think fading away slashes everywhere thinking I am a bandit I stole my own life the one that could have changed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amie-Lee ...... 24 February 2008

Yea, I agree, very mind-stirring.

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Malini Kadir 28 February 2008

Suicide.......a thought with mirror in sight.....loved the read thank you....

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Bootiful Kid 04 August 2008

wow.... this is an awesome poem... i can relate...

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Arabian Heart 23 June 2008

so many slashes falling to the ground and even though i know this isn't me i wouldn't wish it on anybody every wound can be cleaned as long as you leave whats causing you pain

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Tyease Collins 22 June 2008

So much hate in this poem...nice...you are definately my favorite genre type of poet

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Linda Brooks 16 June 2008

I feel you are a person I can relate to

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.Kathryn Van Atta 04 March 2008

ha, wooow. youre amazing hun; ]

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