Moon Poem by live to die

Moon

Rating: 3.8


I wish I was like
the moon hide during day
then at night no could see
in the dark no one to see my pain
I wish I was like the moon
to disappear on a no moon
then no one would care
if I disappeared like that
I wouldn't reappear
no one who could know me
I hate people that couldn't understand
even if they try the only way
to understand me is to not to know
how could anyone understand
they just asume how I am
always to hide
never to show myself again
because no one should see my pain
so I wish I could be like the moon
to disappear never to show myself again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fred Babbin 16 December 2007

Don't give up kid - keep writing. I've been depressed my whole life until I started writing, and I'm 82, . I hope it doesn't take you that long. And find out what makes a good poem. It ain't luv, that's for sure.

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Arabian Heart 23 June 2008

thats true the only one who can understand you is you but anybody can care and feel love for someone as long as your expressing your self thats all that matters write if it makes you see what you want

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Fallen Too Far 09 January 2008

I know. Thank you. (fallen)

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.Kathryn Van Atta 27 December 2007

Well I would care. A full moon lights up the sky at night for people who cant provide their own light. I think the moon is beautiful. gosh Trevor.

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jazmine kristen 23 December 2007

dont worried u r not only i feel like that 2

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Fred Babbin 16 December 2007

Don't give up kid - keep writing. I've been depressed my whole life until I started writing, and I'm 82, . I hope it doesn't take you that long. And find out what makes a good poem. It ain't luv, that's for sure.

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