Pain is like
a fire
the more you feel pain
the fire gets bigger and bigger
you feel worse and worse
until you look at your life is
just a lie
when you should trust no one
your like a puppet on a string
letting people control your life
you should stand up for yourself
so kill your puppettear goodbye
and your not my master anymore
I feel the same way because I don't want nobody to control me and my life. I don't want that to happen NO NO NO NO! ! ! ! So when I read your poem again and tell myself, I will be stronger. You are a true poet and I rated your poem a 10 because people can relate what your going through especially me. Don't stop keep on writing.
Trevor: Don't give up on life now, you have an awesome talent for writing. I understand how you feel, I deal with deamons in my head everyday having Bipolar-1 Disorder. Don't give up man! ! HUGS 2 YOU, Linda
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
pain something i know both emotional and physical since i was young and if you felt it you know the fire never leaves a fire i hate but know so much