The Only Time Poem by live to die

The Only Time

Rating: 5.0


The only time
I got to say
My last goodbye
Hiding feeling pain
Internal bleeding
from that cut
watching the blood come out feeling weak
you find me dieing
you ask what I did
I cut myself to the bone
you call for help
no answer
I ask you to let me fade
you say your not going to die
let me let me fade
I have nothing to live for
what are you talking about
your life is to precious to me
you will live
call for help again a final answer
this will be my
last goodbye
Goodbye leaving with nothing but
knowing someone really did care

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arabian Heart 23 June 2008

death to save a life but that person life will be filled with pain so how about live to save a life or is this the road you heart has decided to take

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Greenwolfe 1962 15 May 2008

I view this with sadness and almost uselessness. I guess it is because of my own life. A hard read, but well done. GW62

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Amie-Lee ...... 24 February 2008

I like this poem too. It's quite different from all the other corny sadness poems. This one sounds like it's a little bit more genuine.

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Aldo Kraas 28 November 2007

I like it Thanks for sharing

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jazmine kristen 28 November 2007

awww see that one is good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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