The Last Time Poem by live to die

The Last Time

Rating: 4.5


Dieing slow
my last seconds
all you don't want
crying on my shoulder
my last words
you say you don't want to hear
I love you my last words
you didn't hear
I'm dead
your begging for me to repeat
but I cant

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 25 June 2008

Sometimes its too late to realized what 'I love you ' really meant... only know it when it is spoken the last time! Well penned, high marks.

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Arabian Heart 23 June 2008

to never hear those words from a loved once lips make me feel pain i thought i had lost do you wish to hear the words words can make thing feel very powerful be careful on how you use such power

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