Nizamettin Esen Haymanali


My Spiral Dreams


On the twirling wings
Of a warm wind blown
Through my rainbow
Colored spiral dreams
I run to your dreams

Submitted: Tuesday, May 19, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, October 26, 2011

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  • Gold Star - 35,114 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (11/3/2014 2:06:00 AM)

    When wings are dancing-winnowing- blowing the wind- heart throbs for someone a feeling is created and the feeling is of rainbow colors Spiral - deep and deep -solving un solving then dreams enter within dreams - complexity - undefined deep love..very fantastic wonderful that's what I can say : (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 660 Points Leslie Philibert (11/3/2013 4:46:00 AM)

    A fantastic poem, the best I have ever read, you are better than Shakespeare, Keats, Ted Hughes, Sylivia Plath,
    put together, you should win the Nobel Prise for Literature instantly... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 660 Points Leslie Philibert (11/3/2013 4:25:00 AM)

    Nice write, I would (perhaps write it like this)
    On the twirling wings
    of a warm wind blown
    of a rainbow in spirals
    that runs me to you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 23,705 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/14/2009 11:05:00 AM)

    On the twirling wings
    Of a warm wind blown
    Through my rainbow
    Colored spiral dreams
    I run to your dreams
    creating oneness with colourful rainbow...it is simple with clear mesage.....10

    read mine colour......anywhere and home bound (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 778 Points Marieta Maglas (5/23/2009 6:33:00 AM)

    Spiral curve connection between two thoughts is similar to the rainbow. This is the key to this poem.Epithet'' warm wind''comes like to acknowledge the tension of thought. A very beautiful poem.10++ (Report) Reply

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