I Miss You Poem by Nizamettin Esen Haymanali

I Miss You

Rating: 4.5


I always miss
And dream of you
Day and night

And of your silky kisses too
Like these roseate butterflies
Fluttering down to alight
Gracefully and softly

On those longing lips alone
Of my yearning dreams

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandesh Shinde 18 May 2009

Great concept, . Great submission.

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Joseph Poewhit 18 May 2009

Words have a cloud being about them

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Dagmara Anna 30 September 2009

Beautiful and charming poem. Written in the light and enrapturing way.

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Marieta Maglas 09 June 2009

this comparison: ''And of your silky kisses too Like these roseate butterflies'' fulfill with color and this mixed metaphor: ''Fluttering down to alight Gracefully and softly'' can amplify so deeply....the missing...10++

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 21 May 2009

Softly romantic like the butterflies floating down - I like it Nizamettin - Cindy

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Catrina Heart 19 May 2009

lovely simile and image painted well here............romantic!

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Ency Bearis 18 May 2009

simple but very meaningful...great write....10

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