My Scattered Thoughts Ix Poem by Shahzia Batool

My Scattered Thoughts Ix

Rating: 3.8


We could neither live nor die together
now we are neither alive nor dead
we could not cross the bounds of ceremonies
still the dear ties did not end
if not grown
the dark shadows of the long moments
of the sad evening
veiled the poles
the kids who could not trap the butterflies
got tired running in vain;
a few moments were left there
in your arrival
but the Ones who waited for ages
lost the game
and passed away;
God! bless me with an art
so that I can scribe a name in an invisible ink
deceiving all the probing eyes;
I wonder how they could touch the zenith
of the success in trials of the world
who could never ascend the heavens of hearts;
No reliance on the arms
that could not shed the weakness;
hey, you!
veil yourself so opaque
never letting others read the book of life
in your eyes, not even
the inscription of dedication! ! !

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
~~~really scattered~~~
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 03 August 2013

Yes, really scattered! Nice to read.

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Ramesh Rai 03 August 2013

beautiful write. loved your scattered thoughts. be blessed with divine thoughts.

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David Wood 03 August 2013

The recollections of our thoughts during the day are an internal analysis of our aspirations for due diligence. A god write.

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Heather Wilkins 06 August 2013

many scatter thoughts about life. good write

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Dinesan Madathil 04 August 2013

Again the spilt beans of thoughts dear.... The poem is a compliment to your readers Ms Shahzia..

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 August 2013

Never letting others read the book of life Yet scattered thoughts open a window into that book. Beautiful poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 August 2013

Wonderful write...loved your scattered thoughts...Lovely poem... Thank you Shahzia for the beautiful comments on my 100 th poem...Thank a lot..

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Wahab Abdul 03 August 2013

somany things in a single piece of poetry, wonderful, love it, love it......

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