My Poem Poem by Neela Nath Das

My Poem

Rating: 5.0


My poem has no aim
To write the story of dark.
When I will die, it will try
To leave a remarkable mark.

Friday, September 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 28 April 2023

I write a poem with a dream that it will leave a remarkable mark once I die/after my death! That is why a poet belives in his/her work. An excellent poem about the essence of a poem!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 September 2014

A poem is an expression of thought. There is no aim behind it. Beautiful short poem. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 13 September 2014

Wow. Wonderful poem Neela. Very true said in few words..... When I will die, it will try To leave a remarkable mark. Loved it.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 13 September 2014

wonderful very strong....so nice of you to be brought here on PH

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