Blossom Mist

Rookie - 0 Points (24 February 1978 / India)

Love Song - Poem by Blossom Mist

Crazed was the day...
When I heard them say! ! !

We found a love song intact
I dashed out to see is that a fact....

What I saw was a very cute scene
People holding hands with flowers umpteen

My lips curved in an instant smile
I laughed aloud after a while

The valley wore a silken shine
I thought of you my valentine

With no further ado, or time to waste
I rushed back to the tavern in haste

I wrote my own lil love song
Dressed in my red gown nice and long

Got some lilies and a few orchids
Wrapped them neatly and had them hid

As the clock chimed you walked thru the door
Dropped on your knee, n said will you be mine once more

I laughed again and gave you a peck
You lifted me in your arms and said ' what the heck...'

As we join the crowd dancing all along
All I could see was love in the air and our love song...

Comments about Love Song by Blossom Mist

  • Rookie - 0 Points Blest Vividly (3/26/2012 5:59:00 AM)

    beautiful.. makes feel loved :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Lizzie O'neill (3/8/2012 11:03:00 AM)

    That is lovely. So romantic and very beautifully written (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,451 Points Neela Nath Das (3/7/2012 10:11:00 PM)

    lovely poem.I liked it.You have X-factor. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 772 Points Sreelekha Premjit (3/5/2012 9:19:00 PM)

    beautifully written poem, blossom (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 3, 2012

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