Blossom Mist

Rookie - 0 Points (24 February 1978 / India)

Dark Fantasy

I walked through the lanes across the hill
Moonlight glittered through each and every sill

What I saw was a gorgeous sight
He emerged from the alley shunning the light

He greeted me as he took of his hood
It seemed I was rooted to the ground like wood

His eyes shone with a hazel hue
The hair was silky n moist with due

He carried an impeccable charm
A smile that could make people swarm

He was both clam and playful
Had an angelic face but was sinful

He took my hand and blood started flowing thru me like flood
I now realized that it was the devil himself in flesh and blood

He was a master of perfection
And made a lasting impression

In front of me was my dark fantasy
My dreams were alive and no longer a fancy

But I still pinched myself to check if it was true
He pulled me closer and said" I came only for you"

I hugged him hard to hear his heart beat
He said he burnt it down that made him cheat

I looked in his eyes and urged him to take me
To be united with him for the universe to see

He took a fine chalice made of sand
Filled it with blood and placed it in my hand.

I sipped the blood and it filled my every part
Moving deftly it also burnt my heart

Burning slowly the ashes mix with dust
Asking me to go for I must

Now, as I go with my dark prince to his forbidden land
All that I carry is none but a handful of sand

Submitted: Tuesday, April 10, 2012

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Comments about this poem (Dark Fantasy by Blossom Mist )

  • Rookie - 0 Points Blossom Mist (5/10/2012 4:10:00 AM)

    Thanks a ton Saddat! ! ! it was great seeing your comment! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 963 Points Saadat Tahir (5/10/2012 2:39:00 AM)

    misty, a bit dark and caries the sand with it
    a beautiful well rhymed couplet write

    imaginative and fluid...makes for interesting reading

    well done
    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Vipins Puthooran (4/14/2012 6:55:00 AM)

    mysterious frenzy/excellent poem! ! 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sharad Juneja (4/13/2012 1:02:00 PM)

    never ever wondered that i will call a dark fantasy............ beautiful... very beautiful.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Blossom Mist (4/11/2012 5:48:00 AM)

    Thank you.. for the lovely comment! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 280 Points Rajendran Muthiah (4/10/2012 9:11:00 AM)

    In a dark fantasy, a dark prince appeared, looted your heart and took you to his forbidden land. Forbidden land?
    Till the last you maintain the tempo. Beautiful poem creating an enchanting world. (Report) Reply

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