Blossom Mist

(24 February 1978 / India)

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  • Rookie - 320 Points Richard Beevor (4/25/2014 4:22:00 PM)

    lovely poem, like the story and the sadness of love

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  • Rookie - 320 Points Anne Havell (3/6/2014 5:20:00 AM)

    This poem is heavy in meaning and rich In imagery. I've rated it high though I think it could be improved if you maintained a consistent rhyming scheme throughout then the poem would flow more freely without jarring stops. The lines has a strong internal rhythm and this work well. I hope you do not think I am being unnecessarily critical but in my opinion it would be worth putting in a little extra work as basically you've written a very good poem. Well done.

MileStone

While walking on a moonlit nite, I came across a milestone bright.
It shone as a pearl and stood strong as an oak.
I stop to think about the milestones I've got.
I race my mind to the first steps I took, till today where I stood.
The way is filled with milestones big and small.
It speaks a lot and it gives me a thought.
No matter how big or how small, they mean a lot.
Never forget a milestone you've got.
They are the ones that always make you stand tall.

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