Life A Riddle..... Poem by SALINI NAIR

Life A Riddle.....

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Fen was deep and volatile
Beyond the borders of shadows
Emptiness grooming inside
To proclaim the floppy trenches ahead
But greenery that never prohibited

Revamp the marsh land and get filled
Heaviness that need to plunge
To the width of a lively shore
But the trenches grab that trail
Reassurance that vague sometimes

Always slip to the depth of shadows
There crack that peek sometimes
Necessity that conquest inside
Grit of time that grin for long
Like the empty corner of life

Life is like a marshland sometimes
Graves that grin but mourn inside
Reassurance drive someway
But will collapse in loneliness
As its build on tears of something! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
construction at fen is difficult...likewise life after a wreck is difficult...............
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shabeeh Haider 29 October 2014

Life is indeed a riddle. Well written. Please see my poetry and your comments will be appreciated

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 October 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kee Thampi 01 November 2014

But greenery that never prohibited keep the greenery of nature in poems

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Heather Wilkins 31 October 2014

life is a riddle nicely written and we have a hard time understanding enjoyed

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Geetha Jayakumar 31 October 2014

Beautiful poem Salini. Very true said, life indeed puzzle us many times. Often we find ourselves standing in mid of riddles. Loved reading it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2014

Life is like a marshland sometimes, very beautiful lines composed in this poem and thought is presented in excellent way and shared here. Nice job.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 29 October 2014

Life indeed a puzzling thing......wonderful piece written beautifully..............

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