In Season Poem by Adeline Foster

In Season

Rating: 5.0


In Season

Rain is falling on my garden;
See buds peeping from the ground?
Sunlight, falling on my garden,
Dressed it in a gorgeous gown.
Leaves are falling on my garden;
See them softly fluttering down?
Snow is falling on my garden;
Great white flakes of snowy down.
Love is falling on my garden
As the seasons turn around.

Wednesday, October 26, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: poem,seasons
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carla Olson 26 October 2011

A great expression of many seasons offering beauty to one's eyes. Love results with each season. Very nice!

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Walterrean Salley 27 October 2011

Beautiful imagery to portray a lovely fall garden. Thanks.

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Hans Vr 30 October 2011

Excellent poem. The surprising last two lines make it really superb.

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Smoky Hoss 07 November 2011

The great purity of natural beauty, in this naturally beautiful poem. Wonderful.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 September 2016

With a reason! Nice work.

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Daniel Brick 02 July 2016

I love the repetition with variation in your poem, which not only gives us the timeframe of the seasons but gives a sense of the rhythm of time passing. And I might add, it reconciles us to the seasonal change, which brings foul weather, ages us, distances us from past delights. But your poem embraces the wholeness of things and gave me an appreciation of that wholeness as I read it. And I like the progression of the various things falling into your garden, culminating with LOVE, an appropriate closure to the poem.

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Bonnie Lundgren 31 January 2012

Short, sweet, complete.

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Vipins Puthooran 06 December 2011

Though this poem deals with the natural beauty, the last two lines are the real poetic lines.I like this poem, , , excellent penning! !

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Kara Towe 29 November 2011

Thoroughly enjoyed this poem, I'm a gardener myself. I feel the longing to be in the soil, churning, planting seeds, tending to them as they grow. Your poem makes me feel like there is beauty year round, no matter what the season. Thank you for sharing.

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Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
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