Adeline Foster

Silver Star - 3,389 Points (Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD)

In Season - Poem by Adeline Foster

In Season

Rain is falling on my garden;
See buds peeping from the ground?
Sunlight, falling on my garden,
Dressed it in a gorgeous gown.
Leaves are falling on my garden;
See them softly fluttering down?
Snow is falling on my garden;
Great white flakes of snowy down.
Love is falling on my garden
As the seasons turn around.

Topic(s) of this poem: poem, seasons

Comments about In Season by Adeline Foster

  • Rookie - 48 Points Bonnie Lundgren (1/31/2012 7:03:00 PM)

    Short, sweet, complete. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 525 Points Vipins Puthooran (12/6/2011 3:42:00 PM)

    Though this poem deals with the natural beauty, the last two lines are the real poetic lines.I like this poem, , , excellent penning! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kara Towe (11/29/2011 12:46:00 PM)

    Thoroughly enjoyed this poem, I'm a gardener myself. I feel the longing to be in the soil, churning, planting seeds, tending to them as they grow. Your poem makes me feel like there is beauty year round, no matter what the season.
    Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,414 Points Smoky Hoss (11/7/2011 2:31:00 PM)

    The great purity of natural beauty, in this naturally beautiful poem. Wonderful. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,126 Points Hans Vr (10/30/2011 9:29:00 AM)

    Excellent poem. The surprising last two lines make it really superb. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,215 Points Walterrean Salley (10/27/2011 12:31:00 AM)

    Beautiful imagery to portray a lovely fall garden. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carla Olson (10/26/2011 5:36:00 PM)

    A great expression of many seasons offering beauty to one's eyes. Love results with each season. Very nice! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, October 23, 2015

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