Adeline Foster

Gold Star - 4,838 Points (Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD)

Who Am I - Poem by Adeline Foster

~ Who Am I


All of the words I want to say
Some other poet has said
In such a stupendously marvelous way
That they just cry out to be read.
So many beautiful poems
Express what I want to express;
For me to say it again
Would be mere presumptuousness.
My words would be a regression
In the light of their thorough address,
Yet my thoughts cry out for expression;
I'll just have to say them I guess
And hope that beside the great masters
My efforts will not be in vain,
And somewhere in the ages hereafter
Someone will read them again
And see the need through my prism
And somehow recognize why
Those words were torn from the bosom
Of one so unworthy as I.

Topic(s) of this poem: humor, poem


Comments about Who Am I by Adeline Foster

  • Dr.subhendu Kar Dr.subhendu Kar (1/13/2016 2:38:00 PM)

    Brilliant write and that has been said, yet nothing is new in revelation and yet nothing is old by blossom, still newness bring freshness to bough, beautiful way of expression, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/26/2015 4:07:00 AM)

    You are really who you are with your works. Nice work. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Oladipo Daniel Akinnusi (12/14/2015 1:23:00 AM)

    amazing, nice work. The same thought I have and seems I have written something relating to this. that is why Solomon said there is nothing new under heaven. but yet, we must not silent because our mind is truly 'crying out for expression' (Report) Reply

  • Thomas Plotz Thomas Plotz (11/21/2015 11:48:00 AM)

    You are worthy, I bend my hands toward you with praise, and brilliants. Thanks Adeline. (Report) Reply

  • Patti Masterman (11/7/2015 12:06:00 AM)

    Absolutely beautiful! You do justice to your Muse, Mr. Service. (smile) (Report) Reply

  • Ken E Hall (8/29/2015 6:43:00 AM)

    Thanks and yes same title but different I's who look for different paths which in hind sight are all learning paths...regards (Report) Reply

  • Brandon Moore (7/7/2015 8:50:00 AM)

    Lovely poem. Beckons me want look outward beyond myself and my own work and into others. Thank you :-) (Report) Reply

  • Mr. Agape Mr. Agape (6/16/2015 9:15:00 AM)

    sweet sis
    because one bird sings
    should all others stop singing?
    led zep was the best
    so should jimi and mick have stopped

    your tweet is perfectly your perfect song
    sing!
    blessings (Report) Reply

  • Geoffrey Fafard Geoffrey Fafard (7/19/2014 3:23:00 AM)

    Poems like this are the traffic on the highway from the soul to the page. I am enlightened and understand the flow. Thank you for that encouragement Adeline It just makes me want to keep my pen inked up. Geoffrey. (Report) Reply

  • Callum Witts (7/2/2014 5:52:00 PM)

    I can relate to this poem greatly, it is beautiful and so well written. Thank you for this. (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (6/28/2014 10:06:00 PM)

    A beautiful write up and I must say that your efforts will not be in vain. Definitely you'll find the ray of success (Report) Reply

  • Lorraine Colon (5/24/2014 11:19:00 PM)

    This is a very inspiring poem, Adeline. It gives voice to a multitude of poets who are afraid of repeating what has already been written about. But we should not have this fear. We all express ourselves differently and deserve to be heard. When I have something to express, I do it, regardless of how many times the subject has been written about, and who wrote it. I guess writing is more cathartic for me - I'm like a volcano that has to erupt. I truly enjoyed your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Michelle Claus Michelle Claus (5/24/2014 6:31:00 PM)

    I've wrestled with my own What's the point? in the past, and now I'm comforted and fortified by this answer: My point of view. Interesting that you wrote about this subject using a conventional rhyme scheme... Every one of us ought to contribute to the interweave of creativity that makes our human race so special. Thank you for suggesting this poem, Adeline, I appreciate it. (Report) Reply

  • Laurie X3 (3/12/2014 5:48:00 PM)

    Out of need! ! Not for competition or comparison but to remember or heal or rejoice! ! (Report) Reply

  • Michael Stevens Michael Stevens (3/10/2014 3:01:00 AM)

    I like it! Everytime I write I think to myself that it is pointless because I dont stack up compared to the people who are remembered in the great poetry books. maybe someday, we too will remembered, even if a little. (Report) Reply

  • Daniel Y. Daniel Y. (2/28/2014 9:40:00 PM)

    The first time I read it I didn't even notice rhyming, I was reading it like a novel. It is a deep concern not only of every poet but of every writer. Especially the last four lines stand out to me. The prism through which you see is uniquely yours. I've written a similar sentiment in my poem The Fight to be Heard. Though mine never succeeds from the pit called vanity. Do you think this is part of the nature of writing, or of caring about writing, or just of human nature? (Report) Reply

  • To Windward (1/23/2014 3:32:00 PM)

    Of all your poems you ask me to read this one. I wonder, is it because you can see the angst in a fellow poet? I felt so much better having read it. Someone, Wilde I think, said, be yourself, everyone else is taken - sometimes this aspiration is rather at odds with what makes someone want to write poetry, don't you think? I've added Who Am I to my poem list, thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul Lyn Paul (12/7/2013 8:20:00 AM)

    What a beautiful natural flow to your words, a pleasure to read. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Bri Edwards Bri Edwards (11/26/2013 11:24:00 PM)

    i quickly added this to MyPoemList before i forgot. how modestly you (seem) to write about your own talent!
    that said, i feel no more need to add to the praises i found in the comments which came before mine. thanks for sharing. :) bri (Report) Reply

  • Guenael Oristel Guenael Oristel (11/18/2013 7:00:00 PM)

    OOOOO, I love the rhythm of this poem. Not only I was able to hear the melody, harmony of this wonderful poem I can also hear your heart speaks. Keep writing and keep shining Adeline. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 21, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 21, 2015


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