M.D Dinesh Nair

Veteran Poet - 1,560 Points (Thrissur/Vijayawada)

IF YOU REFUSE MY FLOWER..


A flower will bloom
In my small garden
On my plant too one day
And I shall offer
The very first one
To you, my dear.

My flower will have many petals,
Its colour will be that turns
You envious of my garden
And its fragrance will traverse
Beyond your stretches.
It is certain.

But if you refuse my flower
What shall I do?
I am pondering over it...
Even after you reject my flower
You will perhaps visit
My garden that is on a knoll with
Its plants creeping unto the sky.

And on your visit, I am afraid
You will nip many a bud at once.
My flower will then frown at me.

Then I shall cry unto the skies
Till the stars invite me
To send my flower to them for ever.

If you refuse my flower,
It will smile from the skies...

Submitted: Tuesday, February 04, 2014
Edited: Tuesday, February 04, 2014

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,489 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/26/2014 8:54:00 AM)

    Compelling and creative! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,751 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (2/8/2014 12:15:00 PM)

    There is no chance for refusal. Keep on smiling. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 687 Points Kavya . (2/5/2014 11:03:00 PM)

    The flower blended with scent of love (connecting to your next poem) cant be rejected but would be accepted smilingly.......i hope you succeed in this Sir.......a good write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,548 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/5/2014 8:57:00 AM)

    I agree with Kanav's comment, that makes me envious of your garden who has beautiful flowers.
    Valsa's comments too I am adding it..Who will deny a flower of such exquisite beauty and fragrance! Don't worry, there would be many takers for it! So it won't go wasted! !
    Valarie's comments too looks beautiful..
    A beautiful flower of a poem - who could refuse such a flower....

    Sir I am just confused what I should comment especially after seeing all these lovely comments. So I am too putting a stamp on it....Beautiful poem. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,179 Points Valsa George (2/5/2014 7:49:00 AM)

    Who will deny a flower of such exquisite beauty and fragrance! Don't worry, there would be many takers for it! So it won't go wasted! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,063 Points Kanav Justa (2/5/2014 4:17:00 AM)

    that makes me envious of your garden, , , , though i did not get the flower, , , and of your writing skills too: P (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,183 Points Valerie Dohren (2/4/2014 9:40:00 AM)

    A beautiful flower of a poem - who could refuse such a flower. (Report) Reply

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