If I were to use a time machine,
I would use it for a common good.
You bet on it
You have my word.
I would just straight travel to the point of time
When things began with a BIG BANG
I would try to stop God from creating anything
I would plead Him to no end.
No universe, no earth
And therefore no woes and tears
Would He agree to that?
He would not.
If God would still carve out things
In this disorder and colossal wastes again,
I would direct my time machine further
To travel further into the past!
To reach His time of 'origin'
God and I will then
Begin to create and share a world
Of all proportions and all equations
And He will whisper into my ears, 'I like you dear',
And I will write a poem on His love.
My time machine will wait for a flight
I will not take Him in it to the Earth of AD 20,400
For I know we/I may not return from there.
But where is my time machine?
I want to use it for a common good.
Ha ha ha... it is a fantasy for a common good madam Valsa. In fact I thought of giving you a lift in my time machine but soon dropped the idea for you might stop the trip midway and would go to the Golgotha hills to weep over the Crucifixion without doing anything to thwart the execution of that great soul! [ joking too]. My wrist watch shows a time that is not correct.... Ha ha ha...
Shahziaji, the particle of altruism attributed to me is thankfully accepted as a good feel. Geetha, I said, If I were to travel... and it`s hypothetical thing. You have quoted about my going back to A.D 20,400 along with God. AD belongs to future, distant future from our AD 2013. Since you people cannot give me a time machine, I am not going to travel to past or future. That is the helplessness here. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Sir, You said you are travelling with God in Time Machine that too many years behind. You went back as long as AD 20,400....and you never want to come down to earth. Then I am just wondering how you can read our comments posted from here the earth. When your travelling is over please do let us know...So that we can come up with further comments for your next poems... Cheerful write....made me smile for a while....Wonderful comments below in a humorous way make it more interesting.....
I don't know my coinage is right or not..i mean for you...the Altruistic existentialism...or ur personalized philanthropy...interesting poem, with more interesting comments...honestly, there's an itching in hand to try the same topic...let's see what happens and when...!
A well crafted piece of imagery............I enjoyed most.......Dinesh Ji...........thanks for sharing................
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What a childish fancy Dinesh! Now be content with your wrist watch, so that you can plan your time in the best possible manner.... If you keep looking at the watch... you'll be surprised at the amount of time, you waste on this kind of hypothetical imagining! ! (joking)