I Wish They Stay Poem by Manonton Dalan

I Wish They Stay

Rating: 4.5


walking playfully under an overcast
cool and clouds craving gentle touch
then wind came, it started to go away
shadows i enjoy so much, is not for me
so i sit; enjoy their passing; beautiful
i wanted them to stay for my dream scroll

twilight came to my delight i should go
colorful prints in my head i have to review
to my surprise...ooh! some are just like you
but i keep it to myself someday i'll let you know
then i went out at night; oh! they are still there
they're resting in silence; starlights everywhere

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anna jonson 28 August 2008

very beautiful i like it

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Greenwolfe 1962 18 August 2008

I found great enjoyment in reading this. There was clarity in the meaning. It was creative in the explanation of his vision of what he saw on canvas. There was almost nothing here find unpleasant. I give it a firm recommendation. GW62

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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