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Ashraful Musaddeq
(5/12/2009 10:51:00 PM) |
My 10 for this wonderful composition.
Love it.
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Yoonoos Peerbocus
(3/15/2009 10:52:00 AM) |
you make a wise poetic use of the stanzaic pattern to kite up the theme /tone
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Ana Zaldivar
(1/24/2009 2:58:00 PM) |
Very beautiful poem :) very well written! 10++++
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Shreya Chatterjee
(11/10/2008 11:02:00 PM) |
all is empty, but my eyes..
they keep on dreaming..
of gorgeous sunrise...
rest is lost among your words...
like twirling stars around my world...
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar
(10/20/2008 5:34:00 AM) |
A good love poem well emoted. you must give your biography for mental communication
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palas kumar ray
(10/14/2008 1:09:00 PM) |
All is empty but my eyes.
HEARTBREAKING
indeed.
Love it.
beyond marks.
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Tess Rockenstire
(10/14/2008 11:15:00 AM) |
nice and romantic with full of emotion, and edgy. Tess
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Nahida Uddin
(10/11/2008 7:04:00 AM) |
This is really Beautiful and its really nice I really like this bit to my ears; it’s absolute beauty
even blue sky could envy
pouring her tears, rustling
on treetops, deafening
we end up running for shed
and end up to softness
of a bed
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