Manonton Dalan

Rookie - 300 Points (virginia, usa)

...But I'M Nothing To You - Poem by Manonton Dalan

you always tell me
what’s broken yesterday
chanting of hateful memory
yet you never ask
how am i doing today

i listen with my wits almost dry
but i still go with you in comfort
cause i’m your rocking support
who never ask you why

there are times it’s cyclistic
i pause a moment and you’re quick
to say ” i’m mumbling with tune”
don’t worry i become your own


Comments about ...But I'M Nothing To You by Manonton Dalan

  • Rookie - 120 Points Maia Padua (3/31/2010 6:48:00 AM)

    very nice to read...
    really great..anybody who experience that can relate
    or even those who didnt because your words are so convincing
    thanks for sharing

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  • Gold Star - 45,281 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/13/2010 7:45:00 PM)

    there are times it’s cyclistic
    i pause a moment and you’re quick
    to say ” i’m mumbling with tune”
    don’t worry i become your own...... no you are always something... it is expressde and felt too... lovely piece of writng.. i liked it.....10


    read mine..... anywhere....color......come home (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Nooruddeen Mm (7/1/2009 1:41:00 AM)

    Mononton
    One of the many faces of the Love
    Good one
    Tks
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  • Rookie Shreya Chatterjee (11/10/2008 11:07:00 PM)

    may be we were twins at some point of time...for what i know feel you have already written down..how well u read my little mind...simply awestruck... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Daniel Dann (10/31/2008 3:43:00 AM)

    hey dis is a great piece.
    we care for someone, because we love him/her..
    and sometimes we wonder if they care for us too, in the same way we do?
    but it doesn't matter, as long as we're sincere..
    but we gotta give our best, so that later we wont regret..
    thanks. dan. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (10/28/2008 12:56:00 PM)

    well penned................ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 243 Points Palas Kumar Ray (10/19/2008 2:45:00 AM)

    Love is manifested in so many different ways in our lives.The care, dependence and freedom of speech are all truly those ways to give you the fragrance of life.
    Wish you enjoy it a lot. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zia Eybers (10/9/2008 9:59:00 AM)

    A poem I can relate to.....if your words means what they felt while I read them...well....I do not feel alone (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anna jonson (10/5/2008 8:44:00 AM)

    intresting.......you've chosen beautiful words
    enjoyed (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Janri Gogeshvili (10/2/2008 6:52:00 AM)

    Interesting psychological 'etude', poetic aroma … 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (10/1/2008 11:11:00 PM)

    An impressive work.
    Love it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (10/1/2008 9:05:00 AM)

    well said and well penned.......loved it! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Analou Pabalate (9/30/2008 7:24:00 PM)

    hmmmmmmm........ang lungkot naman....... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 27, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 27, 2008


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