Manonton Dalan

Rookie - 213 Points (virginia, usa)

after the rain


certain stillness up above
harmony after raindrop
birds start singing again
trees dripping wet; clean

fruit washed; so beautiful to look at
i could see ants crawling on branch
later on, grass grow, flowers bloom
as grasshoppers hopping for room

feel freshness of wind blow
hear ruffling leaves in hollow
see ebbing river; crystal clear
breath freely love is here

Submitted: Saturday, August 02, 2008

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  • Rookie Steffi Webster (11/28/2008 6:50:00 AM)

    An interesting acheivement. The gradual progression into rhyming couplets makes me think of a dropp of water steadily flowing into a trickle and then a stream, growing with the swell of water... though I may be completely wrong! Even if I am I still thoroughly enjoyed it so well done x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Arwen Lee CW (9/21/2008 3:17:00 AM)

    Despite gloomy clouds in the sky, we will find the way to sunshine......
    And we shall bath in the sunshine-after the rain. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 34 Points Maia Padua (9/16/2008 8:37:00 PM)

    ...thanks for your comment...
    ...your poem is touching.every line
    .just like our life..after so many trials...there's happiness waiting ahead of us...... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 106 Points Melvin Banggollay (8/5/2008 2:26:00 AM)

    I can see you got an excellent poetical style and a fresh rhythm of your heart. Keep writing and sharing this wonderful poem.

    take care,
    melvin (Report) Reply

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