What I read is a journal of a simple man who draws on the rhythms of daily living. Your written communication is naturally honest and poetic. It gives us a glimpse of the event and the emotion is re-created. Keep at it, G.
Hi Manong MD,
You are a very versatile writer and you have been my inspiration to write in our dialect since I started reading your works in Pangasinan Online. Mas lalo akong naiintriga sayo. I wish I could meet you in person and see who is behind the keys (pen) . When I read your poems, they always make my day. Responding to your poems is even honing my knowledge and ability to speak our dialect.
Thanks for the inspiration.
dark clouds wanting to cry so low i feel they pass me by chased by persistent wind corralled by tall mountain circling overhead, whirlpool forming threads in spool pale brightness from sun guiding my journey to lowland