Manonton Dalan

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...You Amaze Me - Poem by Manonton Dalan

more... i heard
your passion
pigmenting new desire
as sweet as grapes
on summer breeze
crystallizing
to glimpse of sunshine

when dry leaves
separate from vines
gently fluttering to gravity
unwilling to touch ground
i focus my eyes on you
looking at your inner soul
finding my way deep
that only you
could keep
but i insist
you’re remarkable


Comments about ...You Amaze Me by Manonton Dalan

  • Lalitha Iyer (3/12/2016 7:59:00 PM)

    gems, gems, gems, sugar coated, juicy, lovely, sweety, oh watering hearts....................................greedy is every woman to owe this poem.....................ha ha ha....................... (Report) Reply

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  • Bharati Nayak Bharati Nayak (1/17/2016 7:48:00 PM)

    The poem is really amazing. (Report) Reply

  • Sofia Kioroglou Sofia Kioroglou (1/14/2016 5:04:00 PM)

    Very unique poetic diction! Luvz it! (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/29/2015 12:39:00 PM)

    Superb poem, I liked it.....my pick from your poem....10
    i focus my eyes on you
    looking at your inner soul (Report) Reply

  • Roseann Shawiak (4/5/2015 12:44:00 AM)

    A remarkable poem, very well written, stems from the heart of a romantic person. Thank you, RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Matthew Foor (1/24/2013 11:03:00 AM)

    Great job... I cant wait to read more. I hope you would return the favor. :) (Report) Reply

  • Ena N. Mori (7/28/2012 1:55:00 AM)

    beautiful poems don't just happen like that...such a wordy world of a poetic mind. (Report) Reply

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz Prince Obed de la Cruz (5/3/2011 9:18:00 PM)

    sweet and romantic... nice penning... (Report) Reply

  • Ken E Hall (4/8/2010 3:26:00 AM)

    A gentle ode to a loved one using nature's wonder as a yardstick which I'm sure it would be pleasing to recieve..thanks
    regards (Report) Reply

  • Reshma Ramesh (12/1/2008 8:33:00 PM)

    wowwwwwwwwww! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! beautiful.........what a great write............i wish someone had written that to me! ! hehe......10 plus my friend........superb! ! (Report) Reply

  • Steffi Webster (11/28/2008 6:48:00 AM)

    A stunning penning. The simple structure conveys the emotion and the slight occasional rhyme helps it along in its flow. Very impressive. x (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 17, 2008



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