Manonton Dalan

Rookie - 233 Points (virginia, usa)

...You Amaze Me - Poem by Manonton Dalan

more... i heard
your passion
pigmenting new desire
as sweet as grapes
on summer breeze
crystallizing
to glimpse of sunshine

when dry leaves
separate from vines
gently fluttering to gravity
unwilling to touch ground
i focus my eyes on you
looking at your inner soul
finding my way deep
that only you
could keep
but i insist
you’re remarkable


Comments about ...You Amaze Me by Manonton Dalan

  • Gold Star - 19,950 Points Roseann Shawiak (4/5/2015 12:44:00 AM)

    A remarkable poem, very well written, stems from the heart of a romantic person. Thank you, RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Matthew Foor (1/24/2013 11:03:00 AM)

    Great job... I cant wait to read more. I hope you would return the favor. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ena N. Mori (7/28/2012 1:55:00 AM)

    beautiful poems don't just happen like that...such a wordy world of a poetic mind. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 108 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (5/3/2011 9:18:00 PM)

    sweet and romantic... nice penning... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,993 Points Ken E Hall (4/8/2010 3:26:00 AM)

    A gentle ode to a loved one using nature's wonder as a yardstick which I'm sure it would be pleasing to recieve..thanks
    regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (12/1/2008 8:33:00 PM)

    wowwwwwwwwww! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! beautiful.........what a great write............i wish someone had written that to me! ! hehe......10 plus my friend........superb! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Steffi Webster (11/28/2008 6:48:00 AM)

    A stunning penning. The simple structure conveys the emotion and the slight occasional rhyme helps it along in its flow. Very impressive. x (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 17, 2008



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