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Manonton Dalan

Rookie - 125 Points (virginia, usa)

...you amaze me


more... i heard
your passion
pigmenting new desire
as sweet as grapes
on summer breeze
crystallizing
to glimpse of sunshine

when dry leaves
separate from vines
gently fluttering to gravity
unwilling to touch ground
i focus my eyes on you
looking at your inner soul
finding my way deep
that only you
could keep
but i insist
you’re remarkable

Submitted: Monday, November 17, 2008

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  • Rookie Ena N. Mori (7/28/2012 1:55:00 AM)

    beautiful poems don't just happen like that...such a wordy world of a poetic mind. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 907 Points Ken E Hall (4/8/2010 3:26:00 AM)

    A gentle ode to a loved one using nature's wonder as a yardstick which I'm sure it would be pleasing to recieve..thanks
    regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (12/1/2008 8:33:00 PM)

    wowwwwwwwwww! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! beautiful.........what a great write............i wish someone had written that to me! ! hehe......10 plus my friend........superb! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Steffi Webster (11/28/2008 6:48:00 AM)

    A stunning penning. The simple structure conveys the emotion and the slight occasional rhyme helps it along in its flow. Very impressive. x (Report) Reply

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