I'M Immortal Poem by Benjamin Paa Willie

I'M Immortal

Rating: 4.4


I am immortal
A demented
Guilt-free child
Voiced
I am immortal
And incompatible
So far
While turned
From a hand to another
Topsy-turvy
She fell in
A conversation
With a fellow
And spoke fondly
Of Einstein
Shakespeare
And other immortals
Liar
Demented child
Cursed to utter
Incompatibility
Voiced
The fellow
Hurt
She took
The way towards
The immortals
I am going
To the library
Voiced
A demented
Guilt-free child
There is a show
At the cinema
Laughing is good
For your health
Voiced
The fellow
Ah, you can
Go back to
Kindergarten
There is a lot of
Laughing
There too
Voiced
A demented
Guilt-free child

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 30 October 2011

Great poem again. Really like this one.

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Bernard Snyder 03 December 2014

Very interesting poem, brother! I like it a lot! Thanks for sharing. Also 'congrats!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 03 December 2014

I am immortal A demented Guilt-free child nice poem and congrats

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Benjamin Paa Willie 05 November 2011

To those who didn't get the point of this poem; the child I was talking about is 'A Good Book'. Just imagine any good book. it becomes immortalised like the message of the book. The Authors too, many times. An example is the Bible. If you didn't get what I said it means I am not good at conveying my message and I try to improve upon that. Thank you!

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Ralph The Elf 01 November 2011

i like it really but i just don't get the immortality anyway you are artistic honestly i like puzzling poems

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Wonderful...brother, nice poem, very well

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