I Lost My Mind On The Way To Your Heart Poem by Anna Pacheco

I Lost My Mind On The Way To Your Heart

Rating: 3.2


I lost my mind on the way to your heart
I lost my way on the road to your mind
I have much information to impart
Though I keep it all inside in a bind
I would like you to know all that I feel
Even though shy and quiet as a mouse
I would like you to know that I am real
So you will know if I should be your spouse
Plus we are so much alike, you and I
If we do not meet it would be a shame
It’s so confusing and I don’t know why
Somehow making it all seem like a game
Know you can come to me just as you are
Because you’ll always be my shining star

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanika Jack 19 November 2007

i really liked this poem its something i really can get into

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Rani Turton 11 April 2008

This poem was cleverly phrased and sounded very good indeed. Thanks Anna.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 13 August 2015

Your poem has already reached my heart. Thanks for sharing.

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John Richter 13 August 2015

ok... I'm Sold Anna! I'm on my way down to Miami right now... I've been looking for you for 40 years! I hope you like smoked sausage and sauer-kraut, mashed potatoes and rhubarb pie....

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Kinyua Karanja 13 August 2015

Lovely poem, It's like adding anything on it will spoil the taste.

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Ramesh T A 13 August 2015

A nice love sonnet to read and appreciate the poet!

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Mark Nwagwu 21 April 2008

a flowing surreal poem - come to me just as you are - for to me the way you are is the way I see you and want you to be that wqe may be truly one.... great

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