Anna Pacheco

Rookie - 10 Points (1962 / Miami, FL)

Cool Moon Traveling - Poem by Anna Pacheco

a cool moon today I see
though a lonesome view she is
alone she is not
accompanying me along the way
enchanting my eyes,
basking in its beauty

while in my view
my companion she will be
until I arrive at my destination
then her loneliness will prevail
in parallel to mine

Comments about Cool Moon Traveling by Anna Pacheco

  • Gold Star - 5,579 Points John Richter (8/13/2015 10:58:00 AM)

    I am certainly impressed and wondering where you have gone. Such an incredibly refreshing and soul-familiar style of writing you have.... I love this.... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (8/3/2008 7:38:00 PM)

    I like clarity and this piece has that. Though it is not a satisfaction to experience a lonely moon. It was pleasant to hear someone describe one.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 14, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 16, 2011

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