I Dreamt I Danced With You Poem by Valerie Dohren

I Dreamt I Danced With You

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Last night I dreamt I danced with you -
We Waltzed between the stars
Then Quickstepped through the asteroids
Passed Jupiter and Mars.

I wore a gown of crimson silk
And you a waistcoat bright -
Glittering ‘cross the star-filled dome
We danced through all the night.

With eyes that met and cheek-to-cheek
Enfolded in your arms -
Your hand upon my slender waist
Enraptured by your charms.

We Samba’d in the twilight hours
Together with such grace -
On clouds of ether floating high
We Tango’d on through space.

Then falling down to earth again
We Cha-Cha’d round the moon -
And as the music filled the void
I felt our bodies swoon.

Last night I dreamt I danced with you
But now the dream has gone
Yet in my heart the memory
Shall linger on and on.

Monday, May 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Romance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juan Olivarez 05 May 2014

Val I have said it so many times, you are the greatest. No one can write verse like you can. Beautiful poem God bless.

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Valsa George 06 May 2014

Escorted to a magic land where two souls reel round holding hands in tune to the celestial symphony and made one in spirit.... Though the dream is evanescent, it can still give you a hang over for days... I am sure!

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Dinesan Madathil 06 May 2014

Dancing for a while is very kind of you Val. The duo dancing all across the space is a pleasant thing and I would like to see you both performing from a distance.... At the end of this dream let your mind begin to dance Val..

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Dave Walker 06 May 2014

A beautiful poem, memories last forever.

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Celestial dance indeed. Magnificently performed.

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Amitava Sur 20 June 2014

Such a beautiful imagery Valerie remembering dancing with beloved took me or dragged me in a diff. world.A lovely poem in deed. Thank you.

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Elena Sandu 18 June 2014

Valerie this poem made me feel the joy of waltzing with the sunrise and tango with the sunset. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem!

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Meena Mustafa 26 May 2014

A lovely flight of fancy... beautifully written.

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Lucifera Santez 25 May 2014

Last night I dreamt I danced with you But now the dream has gone Yet in my heart the memory Shall linger on and on. this is amazing. you are a gem Val, the way you write, everybody cant do that. :)

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Bursting with a beauty that can awaken dreams into reality of poetic perfection! Excellently expressed my friend!

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