Home And Love Poem by Aftab Alam

Home And Love

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Heaven of my enjoyment is -HOME,
Why to move aimlessly? Why to roam?
Life of vulgarity ends, if ye -LOVE,
Love and home- makes a nest of -DOVE



©2014 Aftab Alam Khursheed. All rights reserved

Friday, October 24, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
What I have done HOME- expanded it, Love- Expanded it so line 1 and 3 similarly a poem that is poet vertically i descended
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Md Asadullah 26 October 2014

Great message in just four lines, nicely structured, thanks for the share :)

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 25 October 2014

.this is four lines poem ending with four letters and 1st and 3rd line is expanded- HOME and LOVE, Heaven of my enjoyment and life of vulgarity ends thank you CP and SA and MM

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Sentamu Aziz 25 October 2014

Very unique, thanks for sharing Aftab

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Clarence Prince 25 October 2014

A four lines poem It's rather unique Four letters for Home Four letters for Roam Four letters for LOVE Four letters for DOVE Well done, Aftab!

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Mantu Mahakul 25 October 2014

Yes you are true the home where there is love in between each other among family members is really like heaven. This is the wonderful nest of Dove. Very nice poem.

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