In the land unknown
There lived two ineffable lovers
Who daily met on a bridge
Built between banks of a river.
They were not too young
They were not that old
They just were teens......
Still teens to behold.
They thought about each-other
Every second of the long day
But when they would meet-
Not a word to say!
But even silence has a language
Understood well by those eyes
Which have affection and care
But no place for lies.
Alas! Considering the future
They decided to part
Yet they were connected somehow
What a play of heart!
They both grew up enough
To stand tall by their own.
But needed each-other desperately
No longer they could stay alone.
Then they met at the same bridge
So happy to see eachother's faces.
So happy to be together
Like two ends of shoe laces.
And I, the traveler from that land
Has come to greet, to shake hand
With the lovers who came here
From my unknown land.
Good poem, liked this lots. Loved the lines.. What a play of hearts and Like two ends of shoe laces
Wow so romantic! Teenage love continued in adulthood..
Good poem with a nice story and mimicking melody...keep writing_Soul
A beautiful romantic poem. The two young lovers grew out of their initial infatuation and allowed their love to mature and ripe! Ofcourse they have to be greeted for remaining steadfast in their love all these long years! !
2 ends of shoe laces! ! ! [- -I like this phrase! heart-touching! keep wrting, my pal
wow! a remarkable and romantic poem! strong love built way ago, shattered and ended back in each others arms! great love!
wow..it made me remember my past days when I and my love.....ah! ! ! what were those days...so inseperable....nice poem buddy...great talent with a constant flow of feelings...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A great poem, like it. May I invite you to read my new poem called, For Bartley Gorman King Of The Gypsies.