Janet Budd

Rookie (September 1950 / Oldham, UK)

From Arthur To Zen - Poem by Janet Budd

31st December 1919 – 6th March 2005

Don’t know where to find him.
How can I truly care?
He left nothing behind him.

Tokens that would remind him
He’d scattered, who knows where.
Don’t know where to find him.

Where was the link to bind him
To his child? Should I care
He left nothing behind him?

I found a note signed by him.
Familiar yet rare.
Don’t know where to find him.

I wrote to define him
In curls and loops we share.
He left nothing behind him.

Maybe life resigned him
To desire but not to dare.
Don’t know where to find him
He left nothing behind him.

Comments about From Arthur To Zen by Janet Budd

  • Silver Star - 3,368 Points Bernard Snyder (1/7/2015 3:57:00 PM)

    Interesting poem. However, I do wonder to whom you speak of. maybe that question is what makes this so beautiful and intriguing. Congrats on being chosen 'poem of the da'. Well-deserved! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 12,033 Points Savita Tyagi (1/7/2015 9:43:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. Title speaks a volume. A Like of detachment and a life of attachment depicted so well. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 28,812 Points Kim Barney (1/7/2015 8:18:00 AM)

    Amen to what Kay Staley said below. Great comments mirroring my thoughts almost exactly.
    Also, congratulations for having this poem chosen as poem of the day on January 7 for three years in a row now! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,648 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (1/7/2014 11:34:00 PM)

    I like the repetitive pattern of the words Left nothing behind him... Indicates a feeling of both emptiness and indifference at the same time. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,190 Points Kay Staley (1/7/2014 10:40:00 AM)

    The lyrical repetition of the word him in spite of not ryming sounds soothing when read outloud. Vague about the relationship between the author and who the author is writing about. Invokes ideas of wondering about your own past and what you leave behind. The best part is when the author asks themself if they should care that the person left nothing behind them. When other people hide is it our problem to find them? Not a bad poem but lacks identity that the reader would want to link themselves with. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,219 Points Babatunde Aremu (1/7/2014 8:53:00 AM)

    A great poem, I like it. Keep the pen flowing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,824 Points * Sunprincess * (1/7/2014 8:26:00 AM)

    ...some great lines in this write..

    ~.Where was the link to bind him
    To his child? Should I care
    He left nothing behind him? ~
    .........this is sad when there is no link to bind someone to their child..
    no photo, no memento, not even a story...it leaves the child wondering
    what their other parent was like...and if only their parent didn't pass
    away when they were still a baby, life could have been so different. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 171 Points Alistair Graham (1/7/2014 2:38:00 AM)


    Look with your eyes at the clock
    Hear with your ears the tick-tock
    Think of the time
    Not of the rhyme
    Latent potential unlock (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 187 Points Owain Glyn (1/7/2013 6:13:00 AM)

    This is the first piece of your work that I have had the pleasure of reading, I shall take the time to read more. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Colin J... (4/21/2009 7:32:00 AM)

    I like this one as well...
    A clever use of words...
    Colin J... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 14, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 7, 2011

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