Silence is the comfort of the thought of you,
In a noisy crowd you talk in words that dance painting a splendid new view,
Music, a lifelong friend, a sweet soul like meditating in a church pew,
Cowboy films are at the core of your being, your roots of acres of farmland,
You are a comedian too, surging forward like the ocean embracing the sand,
Your blue, soft eyes merging into the light of each new day
Shining as you hold my hand,
This night of moon and stars
Shining your forever love across my universe, never too far,
We get into your old, grey Toyota car,
I float forever in the deepness of the pools of light in your eyes,
Reflecting your emotions
A certainty like the moon and stars, God's gift across smiling skies.
Reading this, I have a lovely feeling. Your cheerfulness and sense of fulfillment are radiated into me through these beautiful lines Hazel!
I treasure the new beautiful you, and the feeling and emotion you have poured here is like a flowing river from your heart...peaceful..love this write and i am happy for you Hazel :) Definitely life will get better day by day
this uncommon love comes from an uncommon lover. amazing may you be equally loved and blessed
This is such a serene and uplifting poem! In the completeness of mutual love, finally, the lovers have found fulfillment and happiness. '' I float forever in the deepness of the pools of light in your eyes, '', it is the most exquisite and expressive line in the poem. A great, lovely poem!
If a friend can give serenity and stillness to the mind, it would be like gained a universe of joy. Enjoyed it.
silence catches cool and calm heart becomes heavy and hard eyes closes to embrace shadows and soul- a romantic creation haseel
It gives a lovely feeling in reading this poem. Love is like a blooming flower from it's bud. Gradially it emanates it's beauty all over and that is love. Thank you Hazel foe sharing it.
So beautiful. An over used word but the beauty of this piece just overwhelmed me and I cannot think of another word that quite captures its essence. It's lovely- but more. It's fetching- -yes, but so much more. - - - - - - -Silence is the comfort of the thought of you - - - - - - -a sweet soul like meditating in a church pew, - - - - - - -Your blue, soft eyes merging into the light of each new day Shining as you hold my hand, - - - - - - -This night of moon and stars Shining your forever love across my universe - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I think I need resuscitation! ! ! The love in this poem is heart-stoppingly lovely, breath-takingly beautiful. A 10++++++++++++++++++++++
How happy it surely is to behold one's true love and chart a course of love together. A beautiful write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
In the deepness! ! Nice work.