Hazel Durham


Black And White - Poem by Hazel Durham

White dazzles my inner divide,
Black thrown in with my unruly side,
My parents wave me a lingering goodbye,
They have always nurtured my childlike soul,
As I try to fly from my warm nest,
To accomplish and try to be the best,
In a world full of colour so bold,
I'm painted black and white,
Standing out for all the wrong reasons,
I dare to fight,
I always daydream in multicolour scenes of joy,
Living is a struggle with silent screams of turmoil,
Stirring the concoction to the boil,
As i listen to remarks that stick permanently,
I try and climb to a great height,
To discover a view, that I can never see,
I bounce back into a fantasy of nature holding my hand,
Accepting my limitations,
Tasting the sweet prospect of finding words a sensation,
Black and white finds the curious light,
That shimmers with substance and dances across the page in ink,
I cross a a wide bridge that is my link,
To dissolving the empty divide,
Like the certainty of the incoming tide.


Comments about Black And White by Hazel Durham

  • Rookie - 358 Points Gary H (8/6/2015 8:09:00 PM)

    What a awesome poem I liked it thats for true. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 30,755 Points Valsa George (7/12/2015 11:48:00 PM)

    Yes, black and white dazzles you and we see you creating magic with your pen! With it you can fill the empty chasm in your life! Great diction! Enjoyed much! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,665 Points Hannington Mumo (6/2/2015 10:22:00 AM)

    Wow! Unputdownably well-written.10/10... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,180 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (5/17/2015 3:34:00 PM)

    A creative and compelling composition! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,045 Points Herbert Guitang (5/12/2015 6:43:00 PM)

    I am dazzled with your beautiful poem Hazel
    Superb. Rated 10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,318 Points Akhtar Jawad (2/6/2015 10:04:00 PM)

    I cross a a wide bridge that is my link,
    To dissolving the empty divide,
    Like the certainty of the incoming tide.
    The entire poem is beauty of words, particularly the above quoted lines..............10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 40,859 Points Chinedu Dike (12/24/2014 11:34:00 AM)

    You are a natural poet Hazel. I enjoy reading your poems. Thanks for sharing your lovely poems. MERRY CHRISTMAS. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,758 Points Bernard Snyder (9/12/2014 2:30:00 AM)

    Simply dazzling! ! ! I will gladly include you into my 'favorite poets' list. Thanks for sharing! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,546 Points Marie Shine (4/13/2014 5:18:00 AM)

    As an innocent facing a difficult, sometimes cruel world, leaving the family nest for the first time, with a lack of experience, you have, through excellent word choice, conveyed feelings of natural curiosity, desire for independence and a strong desire to do your best. The world at first may appear to be black and white, but soon, one sees that there are many other variants of both colours also, in every day life. I love how when things get tough, you seek solace in Mother Nature, that is truly the answer. A child-like soul needs Mother Nature always! So many will, I know, identify with the feelings and thoughts expressed in this superbly inked write, Hazel. Experience teaches us... Getting that experience is not an easy task! Beautiful work from your golden poetic pen! Thank you for sharing. Blessings always... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,546 Points Marie Shine (4/13/2014 5:18:00 AM)

    As an innocent facing a difficult, sometimes cruel world, leaving the family nest for the first time, with a lack of experience, you have, through excellent word choice, conveyed feelings of natural curiosity, desire for independence and a strong desire to do your best. The world at first may appear to be black and white, but soon, one sees that there are many other variants of both colours also, in every day life. I love how when things get tough, you seek solace in Mother Nature, that is truly the answer. A child-like soul needs Mother Nature always! So many will, I know, identify with the feelings and thoughts expressed in this superbly inked write, Hazel. Experience teaches us... Getting that experience is not an easy task! Beautiful work from your golden poetic pen! Thank you for sharing. Blessings always... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/4/2014 10:31:00 PM)

    White dazzles my inner divide,
    Black thrown in with my unruly side, .....................yin-yang, the fusion of male-female elements is a part of human soul.............besides such eye-opening facts, this poem also contains multitude of inspirational quotes- -I try and climb to a great height,
    To discover a view, that I can never see, ....wonderful write Hazel............ (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points Kanav Justa (1/13/2014 11:56:00 PM)

    love this write, , , , ,

    I try and climb to a great height,
    To discover a view, that I can never see, (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,180 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (12/27/2013 6:40:00 AM)

    Creative and colorful poem in a black and white world! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,882 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (12/21/2013 2:18:00 AM)

    All sorts of adventurous greys in the black and white divide. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (12/12/2013 10:52:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem once again Hazel. Life always comes in multiple colours. Beautiful way you have portrayed life in black and white. Loved the way you presented it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,455 Points Ramesh Rai (12/10/2013 11:25:00 AM)

    It can not be defined as perfect expression of emotion unless getting a poetic shape. but gradually it increases in colorful way and try to fly from its warm nest as a baby chirping bird as well also try to climb a great height. you have painted the whole write with colorful ink with different aspects of life. In true sense so far i find it is one of your best philosophical write.In the concluding para as you have written, 'black and white finds curious light'. In nature sunray also starts with two colours n subsequenly form a spectrum. similarly your thought is making spectrum of your emotion. As the grt poet Robert Frost has said, when emotion gets thoughts and thoughts get word a poetry is formed. if it is sktched in a graph chart it can be observed that scale has gone upwrd. your overall poetic life has climbed in the same manner which is now able to face the high thought touches the shore of life. Congrt my friend Hazel for such wonderful achievement. keep rise unless touches the max. height to the best of your satisfaction. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,785 Points Khairul Ahsan (12/10/2013 9:36:00 AM)

    'White dazzles my inner divide,
    Black thrown in with my unruly side, '
    This is a dazzling start given to the poem.

    'In a world full of colour so bold,
    I'm painted black and white,
    Standing out for all the wrong reasons,
    I dare to fight, '
    This needs courage and you seem to have that. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,037 Points Sayeed Abubakar (12/10/2013 6:31:00 AM)

    Very good writing. I feel you are improving every day in writing your poems. I like your imagery and good rhyming. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 773 Points Mike Barrett (12/9/2013 1:23:00 PM)

    Hazel, I like this. I believe you've done a great job getting across the idea of the dichotomy of the black and white and multi-colored universes. Those working in the mental/rational universe tend to get caught up in the black & white universe (black & white...no shades of grey) to them the mind and the power of the mind is the be all & end all. That kind of thinking brings me back to the early days of TV...only black & white images. But then came color TV....a quantum leap. I like the analogy of seeing emotions as colored pallet. The primary colors are there - red/blue/green (love, hate, joy, fear) . Get a rationalist to learn to accept feelings and deal with them changes his/her perceptions by a quantum leap....the colored universe opens and offers infinite unfoldment possibilities. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,231 Points Valerie Dohren (12/9/2013 10:30:00 AM)

    We are all a mixture of black and white, and many other colours too. Fascinating write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 7, 2013


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