Valsa George

Five Liners.3,4 (Rolling Wheels/ Change) - Poem by Valsa George


Ancestors depart, leaving no heirlooms to keep
Years flip by with all dreams stashed away
Sun sets casting dark shadows behind
Body weakens corroding vitality and drive
But mind, like a young girl, steams with longings!


A scarecrow smiles, an infant sneers
A lion bleats, a lamb growls
Thieves chase the police, peahens strut feathers n’ dance
In sync with the times,
Everything has changed!

Comments about Five Liners.3,4 (Rolling Wheels/ Change) by Valsa George

  • Gold Star - 50,494 Points Akhtar Jawad (12/18/2014 12:53:00 AM)

    Wheel of time never stops like a long distant drive during which landscape is changing after every few miles. Thoughtful poems. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 17,729 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (10/19/2014 1:02:00 PM)

    Wheels of Time roll by resulting in change of things.......Valsa.....flesh may be made weaker but spirit stays
    stronger........wonderful poetry (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,634 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/30/2013 10:53:00 AM)

    Time rolls resulting in change. Body weakens and mind is ever stronger. Change seems to be reversal of what we normally see. Beautifully rendered. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,456 Points Valsa George (9/29/2013 3:38:00 AM)

    You are quite right Asadullah! I am so happy that you have rightly linked the two poems. Though they are independant poems, there is a link. As the wheels of Time roll by, change happens! Thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,112 Points Diane Hine (9/28/2013 10:47:00 PM)

    Some things change too fast and some things change too slowly. Two enjoyable short poems. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,177 Points Kee Thampi (9/27/2013 10:52:00 AM)

    Body weakens corroding vitality and drive
    But mind, like a young girl, steams with longings!
    I realy wish to read it again (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,825 Points Anthony Di''anno (9/27/2013 8:39:00 AM)

    'years flip by with all dreams stashed'
    A great line Valsa. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (9/27/2013 1:47:00 AM)

    First one is a beautiful thought about life not being stagnant and second ones brings a wide smile.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,483 Points Shahzia Batool (9/27/2013 1:25:00 AM)

    @ title: 3,4 numbers are what i did not get at, it might be the sequel of some 1,2 which i have missed reading perhaps...though the title is clear...
    @ the poem: the vision of the longing mind is experiencing something really different in the 2nd part CHANGE...! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,503 Points Lyn Paul (9/26/2013 1:46:00 AM)

    Great thought in these words..Thankyou (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/25/2013 8:53:00 PM)

    yes we have changed what the wheel was now modern wheel changing and changing nice write (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (9/25/2013 7:41:00 AM)


  • Bronze Star - 2,075 Points Noreen Carden (9/25/2013 5:50:00 AM)

    Everything changes for sure sometimes not for the better
    Great poem well written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 481 Points Danny Draper (9/25/2013 4:40:00 AM)

    Indeed it has and will continue thus, so cock a hoop and make a fuss. :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,127 Points Dave Walker (9/25/2013 3:55:00 AM)

    One thing we can't stop is time, so everything must change with it.
    A great poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 25, 2013

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