Five Liners.17. Dance Poem by Valsa George

Five Liners.17. Dance

Rating: 4.8


On the stage she stood, a sculpted image
With music, she began to sway
With rising rhythm, she gyrated in frenzied joy
Her body flowed like a droplet on a slimy lotus leaf
As she revolved like a top, I got lost in the poetry in motion!

Tuesday, May 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: dance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 13 May 2015

Wonderful crafting of a touching incident. Full marks.

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Sandra Feldman 13 May 2015

This poem. Electrifyingly, brilliant, Dance defined as...Poetry in Motion.... Sometimes one verse is enough, To work as a magic potion. Wonderful poem, Valsa!

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Indeed wonderful! This poem dances. (10)

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Stephen Katona 15 May 2015

I was instantly lost in the motion of your poem Valsa. Your words conjured up a graceful beauty...Valsa, who dances across the page with graceful inky footsteps that seem to flow effortlessly.

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Your poem dances with its lines dynamically changing in length, yet keeping a natural flow. Thank you.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 March 2020

I got lost with the wonderful rhythm of this delightful five liners dear madam! Appreciated this short magnificent composition....10/10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 September 2018

Beautifully crafted succinct write. Loved all excellent lines. The imagery is superb.10+++

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Akhtar Jawad 15 April 2018

Yes, a dance is poetry of a living body, everyone is lost in this poetry in motion. A lovely poem to comment after a long excercise to find a poem of Valsa George that is not read by me. I don't know who loves poetry more, a poet or a reader.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2017

With rising rhythm, she gyrated in frenzied joy Her body flowed like a droplet on a slimy lotus leaf As she revolved like a top, I got lost in the poetry in motion! .... loved these lines. Beautiful poem on Dance having amusing depiction with nice diction. Thanks.

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 May 2015

Beautiful poem dancing in rhythm. Words are dancing along with the steps of dancer. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

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