Five Liners.No.5. A Slice Of Nature Poem by Valsa George

I can see a slice of Nature in this five liner :)

beauty in lines Her brush moved along the surface With a flurry of strokes, images came alive

Beautifully depicted Nature on canvas so lively and vibrant...............Valsa.............

When she gets many such slices readied on that canvas, the bounteous nature will itself be visible to the world. A fine five liner poem from you, Madam Valsa.

the metamorphosis poignantly captured!

Her brush moved along the surface With a flurry of strokes, images came alive A slice of Nature animated with man and beasts! .....touching expression with nice collocation. Beautiful poem nicely executed.10

A slice of Nature animated with man and beasts! An unique thought nicely penned.

How beautifully you have goaded our imagination to 'capture a slice of nature' with your five liner, on 'her easel and canvas'! And wow, what a fantastic impression you gave through these words: 'Her imagination bled into colors deep' With just five lines, a complete picture came alive, just as you said: 'With a flurry of strokes, images came alive'. Marvelous! 10/10.

A lovely detailing of nature through this imagery as a painter... so nice.

A five liner, not less than what she paint. And here the suspense is also added.