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Five Liners.no.5. A Slice of Nature

She fixed the canvas on the easel
Her imagination bled into colors deep
Her brush moved along the surface
With a flurry of strokes, images came alive
A slice of Nature animated with man and beasts!

Submitted: Friday, January 24, 2014
Edited: Saturday, January 25, 2014


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  • Khairul Ahsan (3/11/2014 9:06:00 PM)

    How beautifully you have goaded our imagination to 'capture a slice of nature' with your five liner, on 'her easel and canvas'! And wow, what a fantastic impression you gave through these words: 'Her imagination bled into colors deep'
    With just five lines, a complete picture came alive, just as you said: 'With a flurry of strokes, images came alive'.
    Marvelous! 10/10.

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  • Diane Hine (2/13/2014 5:40:00 AM)

    Fixing a perfect moment or embellishing an imperfect one - it would be great to have that skill.

  • Amitava Sur (2/5/2014 1:23:00 AM)

    A lovely detailing of nature through this imagery as a painter... so nice.

  • Muhammad Ali (2/3/2014 1:05:00 AM)

    A five liner, not less than what she paint. And here the suspense is also added.

  • Marie Shine (1/31/2014 2:32:00 AM)

    Wow! There is no better artist than Mother Nature and you have paid a very beautiful tribute to her in this excellently inked poem, dear Valsa. Exquisite penmanship in this superb poetic gem! Thank you for sharing. Blessings always...

  • Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (1/27/2014 11:44:00 PM)

    Beautifully depicted Nature on canvas so lively and vibrant...............Valsa.............

  • Kee Thampi (1/27/2014 12:33:00 AM)

    beauty in lines
    Her brush moved along the surface
    With a flurry of strokes, images came alive

  • Md Asadullah (1/26/2014 2:09:00 AM)

    I can see a slice of Nature in this five liner :)

  • * Sunprincess * (1/25/2014 9:19:00 PM)

    ......it's beautiful and so vivid...

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (1/25/2014 12:07:00 PM)

    Capture a slice of nature on canvas with a stroke of brush. Beautiful five liner. Thank you.

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