Fiction Poem by Stefanie Fontker

Fiction



Unable to miss you
Would you weep
At my heartless
And cold admission
One of remorse
Not for you
But the lost emotions
For you I once held
And your gorged heart
That I was said to own
I have not given away
But discarded because
I now know that
It was never truly mine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Beckham 21 August 2011

This is very relateble. Loved every bit of it. Good expressions and the theme captured with very minimal words. Excellent. tfs 0/10

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without a name Face 21 August 2011

ooh, really good, I like how you explained how you feel and then are all 'but it's not really mine' and tie it to the title 'fiction' really cleaver. :)

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Allemagne Roßmann 21 August 2011

Wonderful way of self-expression.Proves another genre of poetry in your verses as it does in stories and more so in less consumed time to grasp the ideas beneath.

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