Hollow Poem by Stefanie Fontker

Hollow



You have stripped the world
Of conversation, friendship and love
And offer nothing but unsatisfactory
Substitutions of scratching and feasting.

Yet you are heroized and held high,
Slipped upon a pedestal and sculpted,
Like a happy child holding a gun
To the back of a mother's head.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Burger 19 October 2011

This is a very good poem, like most of your's. The way oyu explain everything is exeptional. Keep up your talent

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Unwritten Soul 19 October 2011

Wo woooo cool down, that was big words and coiled in super meaning, belt it pretty well :) _Unwritten SOul

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Vipins Puthooran 20 October 2011

Beauty of poesy shines in your fingers.. An amazing poem again

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Dave Walker 20 October 2011

Wow very strong words yet again. A great write.

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Jyothsnaphanija Bolla 20 October 2011

its swift, but shorp

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Shadow Girl 20 October 2011

wow...i have to really ponder to grasp the depth..but thats what good poetry is about...great. SG x

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Jacqui Broad 20 October 2011

The finger just pulled the trigger. It is a subject of mystery..why we keep on having blind faith when the odds are against us..

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