Fatal Sins And Solutions. Poem by LaSoaphia QuXazs

Fatal Sins And Solutions.



GREED: is the one when you want more,
Knowing not you get what you need to your next lesson.
Not what you want, the law of life you cannot ignore.

Be thankful for what you have or a better one, then you deserve
more.

GLUTTONY: is known well by those, who eats, buys and waste too much
of everything
Mostly suffer for their gluttony never ending.

Find balance, don't be a prodigal child.

LUST: comes when you want to play the game of sex.
Without true feeling, just with a heartless reflex.

Be kind and loving without abuse.

SLOTH: or a lazy bum, who eventually cripples him/herself,
At the end blames the world & everybody in it or saying
it came itself.

Eat proper nutrition, why you will be energetic, move happily,
so, you never be lazy.

ENVY: is when you envy other's possessions,
Ending up, you even loose your own perceptions.

Be happy for others and for their possessions, then you'll
deserve to have more.

PRIDE: is the one which gives you a hard ruthless head,
Always want to win, step on others and then you are dead.

Be humble, strong and wise, don't try to win. You always get
what you deserve anyway.

ANGER: makes people frustrated, red and hot,
Until they blow up, get a heart attack on the spot.

Stop, stay calm and leave the place or the person who want to
make you angry. Do not give them power over you.

UNFORGIVING: goes in the list, which cannot forgive,
Their life is a tortured one, they wallow in their own
incentive.

Forgive, bless all, call everything 'good' then it turns out
good.

REVENGE: is my last reminder of the fetal sins.
It always hits back on the revengeful, always these sinners
destroy themselves, not one of them ever wins.

Know it is stupid, know that revenge returns multiplied to YOU.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 09 March 2012

Simplicity is the style and quality of your poem, the way you start and end the poem is praise worthy, you are really a talented one, your wording and the poetical diction is properly appropriate, the flow of the poem is like a gushing water, and blowing like a wind making a sound soothing to soul and storming the brain, and very musical to ears, I wish I had written this poem….the theme is original and the poem is well crafted and well composed poem those qualities made the poem a everlasting a piece of fine art…I like poem very much and I will also like you thoughtful on my poems, especially ‘’I want to die’’

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LaSoaphia QuXazs

LaSoaphia QuXazs

Budapest, Hungary, living in the USA
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