Falling Leaf Poem by Abdul Wahab

Falling Leaf

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I run a brush
To paint a falling leaf
But among the glistering lines
I get a picture, static
On that I write a poem
But among the poetic lines
I miss the meaning of the sound
So I sing it in a full throat
Though I get majestic tune
But among the noises of wonderful music
I lose the agony of a falling leaf.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 03 September 2013

wonderful music, good write, thanks.

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Savita Tyagi 03 September 2013

Beautiful and sensitive. Enjoyed it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 September 2013

Beautifully observed the agony of the falling leaf. Thank you.

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Sallam Yassin 07 September 2013

in every dying soul in every falling piece there is majestic power of the nature and there is the agony of this soul and how in words one could seize the both is too hard to do but you grasped images of the two / well done

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Yasmin Khan 05 September 2013

Beautiful imagery and symbolism....the agony of falling leaf is overpowered by a majestic tune.

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Unwritten Soul 05 September 2013

If we can sew the paint with the sounds together with word in lines, we may create a surreal falling leaf images, like your mind crafting now_Soul

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Tribhawan Kaul 04 September 2013

This is human nature to ignore. The write amplifies it. Beautiful poem.

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Ramesh Rai 03 September 2013

one of your best write. a cascading flow in write.

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