Broken heart emo


Fading away


i am fading in the dark
the darkness is evolving in my soul
The pain is rushing through ny veins
No one there to pick me up when i fall
I am just fading
Fading in the dark
This world is nothing but pain
And i have nothing to gain
No one to trust
No one the share my feelings with
I am just fading away
No reason for me to live
No reason for me to care
This world is a place very lonely and cold
Wish there was someone for me to hold
Wish there was someone i could trust
But i am just like the shadow in the dark
The more dark it becomes
The more i fade away
i am fading away
Just like my happiness....
Im just fading away
Into the darkness
Forever...
And no one can save me
Just fading away

Submitted: Friday, July 31, 2009
Edited: Friday, July 31, 2009

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  • Amitava Sur (1/20/2014 8:31:00 PM)

    A poignant write expressing the pain & discomforts in details.... well thought (Report) Reply

  • Emo Boy mike (4/6/2012 11:41:00 PM)

    I love this poem it is great(10+++) ! ! I want to cry but, I can't feel that emotion inside. (Report) Reply

  • Chance (11/6/2009 11:12:00 AM)

    your great at writing i read all your other ones and you are great at writing check me out and let me know what u think (Report) Reply

  • rago rago (7/31/2009 9:34:00 PM)

    In fading away you sprout the fragrance........ fantastic write......... (Report) Reply

  • Marieta Maglas (7/31/2009 2:19:00 PM)

    a poem highly sensitive and emotional by the contrast between this delicate and beautiful human being and cruel world in which lives......10++ (Report) Reply

  • Afzal Shauq (7/31/2009 12:58:00 PM)

    This world is a place very lonely and cold
    Wish there was someone for me to hold
    Wish there was someone i could trust
    But i am just like the shadow in the dark
    The more dark it becomes

    this is a real fading away feelings, the title and the body of the poem.. both inter linked well.. melodic piece of poem.. heartfelt and soul touching one is this poem..well done..10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Karanvir Kataria (7/31/2009 12:14:00 PM)

    u hve describe ur pain in very well manner!
    fading away in dark! ! ! ! !
    hey emo girl very well written! ! (Report) Reply

  • Mary Joy Lumanog (7/31/2009 9:32:00 AM)

    you really good in dealing with your pain in this poem...you it's really hard to be a shadow in the dark! (Report) Reply

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