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A Girl's Love - Poem by Broken heart emo

My heart beats faster when Im with you
My mind is always on you
You are the only thing i think about
Im always caught up with your smile then to listen to you
And im sorry for that!
I only want to spend time wth you
You are the one who comes in my dreams all the time i sleep
I dont know what happened to me?
What is this feeling?
Can it be?
Is this love?
Yes, this is love!
I love him!
But he doesnt love me
He loves someone else as I see!


Comments about A Girl's Love by Broken heart emo

  • Gold Star - 11,819 Points Amitava Sur (7/21/2014 6:52:00 AM)

    The expression of a broken heart was expressed so clearly and emotionally the it touched my heart. Felt intensely (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
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  • Rookie - 161 Points Indranil Bhaduri (8/6/2012 7:49:00 PM)

    Feelings of not getting your love, short and well written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michael Silver (7/13/2012 1:17:00 AM)

    Read some of my poems sometime. This was well written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 460 Points marvin brato (5/26/2012 8:40:00 AM)

    Many can relate, seems the majority! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,857 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (5/16/2012 1:43:00 AM)

    so, you have not changed for the past three year, still in the denial mode! so bad and so sad! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 949 Points Rajendran Muthiah (5/13/2012 12:05:00 AM)

    The rose loves the bee that flies towards the jasmine. The broken heart's emotions are told beautifully. Best wishes to the most popular poet. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 55 Points Kenebo Rajkumar (5/11/2012 3:59:00 PM)

    true love never die, the unique day will come and honor your love..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 341 Points Ekaterina M. Polischuk (3/4/2012 1:20:00 PM)

    good poem....good sad poem... hm... everything will be ok in the end... if it isn`t ok... it isn`t the end (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,844 Points Wahab Abdul (2/29/2012 11:15:00 PM)

    Smartly well described and well scripted, fully thoughtful and engrossing, I like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tracey Pierce (2/18/2012 9:38:00 AM)

    I like this poem, I understand exactly how this person feels.. But then 'love' can also be defined in being happy for a person who is happy in love, even if that happiness is not found in you.. Complicated! : P (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sahmyah Kelley (2/9/2012 9:41:00 PM)

    love is blind and boys are stupied (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Himanshu Sanghani (1/12/2012 9:09:00 AM)

    It was written somewhere don't remember where but it stayed in my mind:
    Don't fall in love, rise in love. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie *BleedingHeart* *Arielle* (11/22/2011 9:24:00 AM)

    Thais was so good that i dont know what to say i know how u feel hun..its hard when the guy i love doesnt even care to love u back i just went through this with a guy and i still love him but he doesnt care and all i can say to u is be careful dotn give ur heart just to anybody becareful who u give it to (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Makenzi Betts (9/28/2011 2:52:00 PM)

    woow.... so sweet: -p (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Habib Noori (9/15/2011 3:57:00 PM)

    love ur poems sweety got some emotion on em: P
    check mine out wen u get time :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 136 Points Zubyre Parvez (7/17/2011 3:54:00 AM)

    Good use of rhythm! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie lost soul (6/19/2011 6:37:00 AM)

    To the one who writes so well,
    you willl find others, more deserving of your love. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 72 Points Akram Saqib (4/21/2011 2:23:00 AM)

    depiction is great in the poem (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,327 Points Saadat Tahir (12/31/2010 7:07:00 AM)

    well well.... it isnt the first time nor the last......but the one n the centre o da storm....its blood every where...
    i so agree with....


    Konstantin Filipov (7/15/2010 6: 24: 00 PM)

    the emotion of love is incredible, but the feeling of loving and not being loved is awful.


    nice lines

    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Virgil Maguad (11/18/2010 12:53:00 AM)

    love...it does not need to understand...it rather needs to be understood... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 4, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, June 19, 2011


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