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  • Ruby Honeytip (8/5/2012 7:21:00 PM)

    I am new to poetry. Your words inspire me and I would love for you to pop by to see what I have written. Take care: -)

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  • John Kennedy (7/26/2012 9:37:00 AM)

    i love this poem
    wish i could be there
    to hold you out of the
    dreadful darkness

  • Rookie - -1 Points Faeo Lyre Clive (7/23/2012 2:42:00 AM)

    Biafra
    [July 2012]
    Monday

    Dear Poet:
    I'm glad to report that even now, at this late day, a blank sheet of
    Paper holds the greatest excitement there is for me ____ more promising
    Than a silver cloud, prettier than a red wagon. It holds all the hope
    There is, all fears. I can remember, really quite distinctly, looking a
    Sheet of paper square in the eyes when I was seven or eight years old
    And thinking ''This is where I belong, this is it. Having dirtied up
    Probably a quarter of a million of them and sent them down drains and
    Through presses, I am exhausted but not done, faithful in my fashion,
    And fearful only that I will die before one comes out right ____ as though I
    Had deflowered a quarter of a million virgins and was still expecting the
    Perfect child. What is this terrible infatuation, anyway? Some mild
    Nervous disorder, probably, that compels a man to leave fiery tail in
    His wake, like a ten-cent comet, or smell up a pissing post so that the
    Next dog will know who's been along. I have moments when I wish that
    I could either take a sheet of paper or leave it alone, and sometimes, in
    Despair and vengeance, I just fold them into airplanes and sail them out
    Of high windows, hoping to get rid of them that way, only to have an
    Updraft (or a change of temper) bring them back in again. As for your
    Gift of so many sheets of white bond, with poetic content, I accept them in
    The spirit with which they were sent and shall write you a book. It will
    Be the Greatest Comment that has Ever Been Written. They all are, in the
    Early wonderful stage before the first word gets slid into place.


    Regards!
    Faeo de Lyre

  • Rookie - -1 Points Emo Boy mike (4/7/2012 9:37:00 PM)

    Ur poems r great10++^^

  • Rookie - -1 Points Anthony Mcduffie (12/1/2011 3:18:00 AM)

    Fantastic poet :) & I would say more, but I'm still too speechless ;)

  • Rookie - -1 Points Surya Shaji (10/15/2011 6:08:00 AM)

    It's really nice and touching! ! !

  • Rookie - -1 Points Nova Saleh (7/22/2011 12:35:00 PM)

    your poems are really good really emotional and touching I will definately read more oh and feel free to check out my poems I'm kinda new at this. http: //www.poemhunter.com/nova-saleh/

  • Rookie - -1 Points Darrin Mcmiller Jr. (6/14/2010 7:31:00 PM)

    I read a few of your poems for now, and I don't see a weak writer I see a 15 year old expressing herself and the world around her. You want to write? Then write, no one can tell you what to write, your telling the story, your telling the world. If you hadn't noticed by now your a creator, Develop your own style, If you hadn't noticed by now this your world and your voice makes whatever universe, multi-verse, or multiple dimesion you want. Keep writing...

  • Rookie - -1 Points Faeo Lyre Clive (4/30/2010 1:05:00 AM)

    Alas!
    Where is there no comment here. Could readers considered your hardworks not worth awarding.
    Ooooohhh!
    You're my nominee for the poet of the day.
    More heights please and keep the flag flying.
    Bravo!

Inside Me

No one knows the true me
i have feelings too....
But everyone keeps playing with my emotions
And keep breaking my heart
Everyone just sees the simling face outside
But inside
Inside is the true me
If someone gazes into my eyes with some care
They will see what I really feel

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