Treasure Island

Broken heart emo


Break Up


We've tried so hard to understand, but we can't.
There is nothing else left in our hand!
We werent meant to be
I tried my hard to be together
But it looks like you dont have anymore feelings for me
I never wanted this to happen
But it looks like there is no other way! !
Our paths are different
And they can never meet again
One thing i would like to say
I loved u....
And can never love again
You meant everything to me..
But looks like you just played with my emotions
Looks like its time to say good bye
Take care my love..
Maybe its the last time we meet
But one thing is for sure
I will always remember you
Time will pass...
Just remembering the little moments we shared together...
And smiling on the funny little jokes we had...
Hoping one day you will realize how much i loved u
And wish u would come back to me! !
My heart will always beat for u
And you will be always and forever in my heart

Submitted: Saturday, July 18, 2009
Edited: Saturday, July 09, 2011

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  • Shoush Sa (10/14/2011 6:09:00 PM)

    It's Just like what happend with me I'm so realeted to this poem
    I wish u write a poem about having a crush bcoz it's what I'm feeling right now (Report) Reply

  • Shoush Sa (10/14/2011 6:06:00 PM)

    It's Just like what happend with me I'm so realeted to this poem
    I wish u write a poem about having a crush bcoz it's what I'm feeling right now (Report) Reply

  • Kyle Youngblood (7/9/2011 12:32:00 AM)

    For a second there I thought you took the first line of 'All We Know' by Paramore. Check the song the first line is the first lyric. Lol. A sad, but true poem... (Report) Reply

  • Robin Machorro (8/13/2010 1:03:00 AM)

    i can relate to this with an ex of mine it hurts so much how something so perfect can end up broken before you even know it (Report) Reply

  • Afzal Shauq (7/31/2009 12:54:00 PM)

    But it looks like there is no other way! !
    Our paths are different
    And they can never meet again
    One thing i would like to say
    I loved u....

    roamntic enough..rich idea, poetic flow and the way you done is perfect.. really enjoyed it and meaningful and thoughtful piece is this...well done 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Black Rose . (7/26/2009 3:05:00 PM)

    A story of my soul.
    I know how u feel...
    Within these dark days i see this in my life too.
    Just remember within dark there is always light, but u must seek it.


    xoxoxxxxxx Black Rose (Report) Reply

  • Lynn Glover (7/24/2009 8:49:00 PM)

    A very sad, sad poem. Breaking up is always hard on some one. I think you expressed the feelings we all have had during a break up. Brings back memories and that is a credit to good writing. A very good poem. Your Friend Lynn (Report) Reply

  • ~ Jon London ~ (7/22/2009 10:14:00 AM)

    A very well expressed poem of the heart......touching to read and I'm sure many will relate to this wonderful share of your heart....well penned (Report) Reply

  • Karanvir Kataria (7/18/2009 1:40:00 PM)

    hey little angel
    very well writen
    keep on writing
    n it cant be fiction as ur last one'emo kid'
    keep on writing 10+ (Report) Reply

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