Expel All Hatred Poem by Theo Williams

Expel All Hatred

Rating: 5.0


Expel all hatred from thy heart
Revenge, fire, will tear thee apart.
Expel all anger from thy mind
No thoughts like these of any kind.

Thou must find loving words to say
Despite deep hurt haunting thy ways.
Thou must expel all hurt and hatred
Find forgiveness, a gift so sacred.

It's hard to rid animosity
And liberate hostility.
Pain hurts thee like a knife so sharp
All this enmity tears humans apart.

Expel the grudge from thy heart
Love one another, is where we start.
Help others with thou caring hands
Peaceful human nature, will rise and stand.

Expel all hatred from thy heart
Love will be defined as world peace art.
Expel all anger from thy mind
Let's build a friendship, amongst mankind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thyris Taylor 30 June 2012

Theo I really enjoyed the message of the poem. It has nice great rhyme and poetic expression. I would only say that some phrases are repeated in no decernable pattern so it appears that the only purpose of the repeated phase is for the sake of rhyme. Otherwise not bad.

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Godfrey Morris 30 June 2012

Well written poem and the message is mast profound

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Babatunde Aremu 30 June 2012

Theo, this is a good poem. Keep it up. I see you becoming a literary giant soonest

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Nurain Ali-balogun 04 July 2012

Exquisite. You are so full of surprises. Keep up the gud work.

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Kaila George 01 July 2012

To live you must forgive...this poem says it so elegantly...sigh...wonderful.

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Valerie Dohren 01 July 2012

Great poem Theo, with a great message.

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Neela Nath Das 01 July 2012

Well rhymed poem with good message for humanity.Loved it.

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Unwritten Soul 01 July 2012

Cleaning hates from heart, make it pure...bring love to all mankind will give transparent look, the message is important to share this is relief mind...the poem not only from our words, selective words by some poets but the real close to heart is how it conclude the meaning inside..u have it here..keep it up_Unwritten Soul

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