Nature's Lullaby Poem by Theo Williams
Nature's Lullaby
Sounds of singing birds so early in the morn
Is a beauty in life that no one can adorn.
Soothing peace of waves gently caressing the sand
Like embracing lovers, amidst placidity they stand.
The scent of flowers, paint a smile on thy face
Surrounded by nature's love, most peaceful escape.
Showered by warmth and richness from heavenly rays
Extracting the best of thy soul, glowing every day.
Night befalls; the bright moon so tender
To nature's love and heart I surrender.
I lay my head down and say goodbye
To nature's beauty; my sweet lullaby.
Theo, You asked for my suggestions on your poem. I hope what I offer is of some help. In the main it was a lovely poem with great sentiment but would be better as a sonnet as that what the poem implies. So add another two lines and close up the poem rather than separate into two line stanzas. Keep the last two lines as your rhyming couplet. They are good. Also I wouldn't try and rhyme every line, try some imabic pentameter it wil flow better. But I must say it is a very worthy piece of work with some memorable lines.
Great rhymes and comparisons, I am not suprised as I have read other poems of yours
Loved this poem, the ways of nature is so wonderful, never exhausts the mysteries they keep
The morn so adorned by waves in sand where lovers stand and perfume of flowers, an escape of everyday life, sun’s rays in all our days filling the soul, a tender moon surrenders to dreams saying goodbye with a lullaby – what a great way to sing your poem today....
Dear Mt. Williams..I love this poem..short, sweet and to the point. Great job...Keep up the great work!
Great poem............................ The scent of flowers, paint a smile on thy face. keep it up
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Theo, You asked for my suggestions on your poem. I hope what I offer is of some help. In the main it was a lovely poem with great sentiment but would be better as a sonnet as that what the poem implies. So add another two lines and close up the poem rather than separate into two line stanzas. Keep the last two lines as your rhyming couplet. They are good. Also I wouldn't try and rhyme every line, try some imabic pentameter it wil flow better. But I must say it is a very worthy piece of work with some memorable lines.